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A Milenio Elenol's avatar

That ending was somehow fucked up, funny and interesting at the same time.

Great story tho. The action scenes are well written and actually fun. The rest too have this 80-90 science fiction vibe and/or style that is mixed in with enough new things to keep it away from pure nostalgia. As I said before, great work

Visigoth On Repeat's avatar

Great story!

Frank Kidd's avatar

Thanks man! and thanks for reading!

Charlie Collins's avatar

Really enjoyed this! Great story.

Letters to My Son's avatar

Goddammit, Frank. Every time I read your stuff I wonder if I can write at all. Well done.

Frank Kidd's avatar

Thank you! That’s the worst/best feeling in the world. Honored🙏

Jeanne S's avatar

I knew there was stuff going on at Wright Patt! Ha. Great story.

Frank Kidd's avatar

you know whats up!